Okay, I'll play. This is a Sith!Rey/Jedi!Ben fic written for a round 1 prompt that didn't get much attention. Also OP had probably moved on since then, as they were silent on the matter. I would welcome some con-crit.
I will provide a much more in depth comment later on as I'm currently at work but I thank you for posting and want to start by saying that this is incredibly well written.
Not the above anon, but I loved it and thought there was nothing wrong with it at all. I hadn't read it until this post because I only read Finn/Poe, but I thought it was excellent.
I'm reading it and really enjoy it! I think one thing you could spend more time on is to describe the setting more since it isn't very clear just from the story what things look like, where characters are currently, those sorts of things. :)
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