There are so many wonderful ideas here. I honestly thought you'd take this into a smutty direction, but I'm so pleased you didn't! I'm practically drooling over the unconventional marriage of geeky SW mythology with more traditional mythology. You made it work so well. This was a pleasure to read!

Btw, I pictured Rey in her desert scavenging outfit (and got alarmed when Kylo tore off her face >_< typo, I'm guessing?).