What a beautiful story! I love the original student characters you created. I believed every one of them. I also love that Rey was an abandoned baby that Luke adopted. It puts a nice twist on the theory that she is his daughter, and I actually kind of prefer it. And, like others, I love Luke's anger! You don't have to worry about him being OOC at all. I think he would be blistering with rage over what happened. Thank you so much for sharing your story. My heartbreaks for Luke and every one of his padawans!