I love this!!!! This is a wonderful first chapter and I love everything you've done here. Finn aware that he's been reconditioned but not knowing why he's protective of Poe. Kylo and Hux being rougher with Poe when the Resistance has won battles. Hux rubbing it in and making Finn tend to Poe. Hux really knows how to twist the knife, yeah? I love Phasma's suspicion and Poe smiling at him and still calling him Finn. <3<3<3
As far as squicks go. I'm not big on permanent maiming or anything involving scat/waterports. I probably should have put that in the prompt. I don't want to limit you, though. I really really love what you've done here and am looking forward to seeing where it goes. xD
Re: [Fill] Am I Breathing underwater? [1/?]
I love this!!!! This is a wonderful first chapter and I love everything you've done here. Finn aware that he's been reconditioned but not knowing why he's protective of Poe. Kylo and Hux being rougher with Poe when the Resistance has won battles. Hux rubbing it in and making Finn tend to Poe. Hux really knows how to twist the knife, yeah? I love Phasma's suspicion and Poe smiling at him and still calling him Finn. <3<3<3
As far as squicks go. I'm not big on permanent maiming or anything involving scat/waterports. I probably should have put that in the prompt.
I don't want to limit you, though. I really really love what you've done here and am looking forward to seeing where it goes. xD