This is pretty great, man. I mean, I'll be over here pining for the 30 chapter in-depth fic that will never be, but I think the short sections you did write flesh out the scenario well. Especially liked that first brutal section with Rey and the emotional yelling and pitiless slicing off of grabby fingers. Yowch. But that's what happens when you're having a showdown on Mustafar.

*Finn voice* "Why does anyone want to go back to Mustafar?!"