FLAWLESS. I mean, it's ridiculous, they're ridiculous, but it works so well! Never apologise for writing more of this (I actually hope you'll keep going).

Also: "in the eyes of the Order the son of those who actively destroyed the Empire, sent us to exile and built the New Republic is, by necessity of identity, inferior to the one whose father abandoned the life he knew in the Empire to transplant its heart and keep it alive!" is legit Hux af. NO I'M BETTER THAN YOU LET ME MAKE A SPEECH ABOUT IT, YOU DON'T KNOW MY STRUGGLE, BE GRATEFUL I WANT TO BANG YOU, STUPID SEXY REBEL SCUM