Yo, not OP, but I enjoyed that immensely. Like, *leans away from my screen, wide-eyed* hissing "Hoooooooooooly shit!" kinda immensely.

[red on Hux’s mouth, chin, throat - did he use his teeth - want - a slow smile around the cigarette, steady hands, damp hair falling into closed eyes - want - want - want]

Ren's deliriously feral inner monologue was A+++