That was amazing and scorching hot. I loved the bloodplay and painkink explored here. It really fit the WoW context you were employing and added a really nice edge to the sex. The frequent use of fine details like the Ren's temperature and the vivid descriptions of breathplay as magic vs breathplay as a physical thing really helped to establish this as a seamlessly fused crossover. The push and pull of this power dynamic also really appealed to me as well.