“You don’t hate me because you don’t know me yet.”
Oof! Right in my heart. I like how the transition from Torturer Hux to Redeemer Hux took over 600 tries to get right, with a lot of blood and pain along the way. I live for the implied struggle!
If I had to suggest anything it would be to add a line break between every paragraph in each cycle section for easier reading. White space is helpful on smaller screens.
Re: FILL Re: GEN or Hux/Kylo, Hux can travel back in time [Part 2/?]
Oof! Right in my heart. I like how the transition from Torturer Hux to Redeemer Hux took over 600 tries to get right, with a lot of blood and pain along the way. I live for the implied struggle!
If I had to suggest anything it would be to add a line break between every paragraph in each cycle section for easier reading. White space is helpful on smaller screens.