Not OP, but I am that other anon with the witch prompts and I am JUST. SO. HYPE. FOR THE SPACE INQUISITION. I love how Hux's superior Imperial manners smoothly keep him from bellowing "filthy savages" in the Hutt's slaver faces, but he's certainly thinking it every damn second he's there. Learn from this example, Mitaka. (Poor Mitaka, his stress always entertains me.)

I'm so looking forward to more! I can't wait for everything to get messy.

Some very minor errors I noticed:
kthem = them
"construction of and concrete"
Thannison = Thanisson

Also AO3 is being weird, saying there are 0 chapters? But... I just read the chapter? What is this witchcraft?! I saw Goody AO3 with the devil!!