I just beta-ed. My report: It's brilliant. Don't change a thing. Unless by change a thing you mean add a sequel, add one of Finn getting the same treatment, add one of X'arrn doing it to both of them together (!!!!!!! please !!!!!!!), or just expand this piece with more visuals of luscious Poe floating in the tub with tentacles inside. Or more descriptions of the sex-ing itself.

But seriously, A!A, get this shining piece of art up on the AO3 already, 'k?