This was beautify written and just the sort of adversarial, contradictory dynamic that really sparks my interest.
There were a lot of little moments that really made this piece for me. For example, Ren not wanting to "waste the Force" on a confrontation with Hux. I also loved the fact that Ren compensated for lack of form with strength because it felt really in character and even the little touch of Hux's underlings keeping the training room empty for him was honestly sweet.
You also wrote amazingly hot sex. The balance between physical sensation and character responses was spot on. The whole theme of "yield" was fantastic, especially because Hux never gave in. I suspect if he did win the next time, Ren would be equally stubborn about not surrendering.
Re: FILL: Kylo/Hux - Playfighting
There were a lot of little moments that really made this piece for me. For example, Ren not wanting to "waste the Force" on a confrontation with Hux. I also loved the fact that Ren compensated for lack of form with strength because it felt really in character and even the little touch of Hux's underlings keeping the training room empty for him was honestly sweet.
You also wrote amazingly hot sex. The balance between physical sensation and character responses was spot on. The whole theme of "yield" was fantastic, especially because Hux never gave in. I suspect if he did win the next time, Ren would be equally stubborn about not surrendering.