Someone wrote in [community profile] tfa_kink 2016-02-16 09:38 pm (UTC)

Author anon

Oops posted the unedited version. Other than spelling and grammar, I have have one major line change, from Kylo at the end:

"Kylo counts the credits before stuffing them in his belt. "If he had waited that long, he wouldn't need have been able to escape Hux. I tried to warn him before but he didn't listen."

Kylo is... The Voice!

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