His men may have had a healthy fear and respect for him, but they were pants-soiling terrified of Kylo Ren

Accurate and fair assessment of the social dynamic of the First Order chain of command.

I love that feeling of TR-4022 being an unwilling chaperone for this pair of idiots. This is very well written too, I can see all the actions and settings even with the not-excessive amount of descriptive passages, which is some nice tight writing ability on display, so well done there!