That was scorching hot hatesex. I adore the sex pollen trope and I think you handled it really well. In particular I liked the fact that the confusion of both parties couldn't quite overcome that constant burning hate. I also really enjoyed the tangent into "we're so alike". True or not, it's always a great thing to confront a hero with. Finally, The detail in your writing strikes a nice balance between external events and internal thoughts. I think this is particularly important for hot, coherent porn. Thanks for writing.