Fiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!! fun, this is more cathartic sado-masochistic enjoyment rather than fun. I love seeing them have to work through this pain, but I'm not just delighting in their pain, I'm also rooting for them and hoping they can get through it eventually. I love that you brought in more characters--it feels big and whole even though it's such a short snippet. Also I love that it's from Finn's POV because there are clearly so many things he understands but also so many things he does not understand. Oof. So good.
Re: 2/2, look what you made me do