(OP) Oh my God this is a hell of an update. I FELT A LOT OF THINGS DURING THIS CHAPTER. But before that, one thing I think I forgot to mention in one of my last replies is that I really love how you weave the on-screen moments together with the off-screen ones; they flow together extraordinarily well, and that's still going strong here!
Anyway.
So admittedly my first thoughts during the first part of the chapter were, "this is going to end so badly, Ben my darling, oh God." I am just soooooo apprehensive about how Ben/Kylo's relationship to Hux is going to throw a spanner in Ben's double agent activities. (If it hasn't already somehow.)
And then I started giggling over Ben's inner six-year old being petty and easily delighted with the terror of the officers.
AND THEN YOU WROTE THIS:
(Anakin raises his arms like a conductor.)
I legit started laughing like a hyena. That line is probably my favorite thing in the entire fill so far. Oh my God, I love it. I fucking love it.
(Also, Mitaka. I have such a huge soft-spot for him. Poor darling.)
AAAAAaaaaaaaaaand the meeting with Snoke. My sense of foreboding doom immediately lit up and started shouting, BAD THINGS COMING BAD THINGS COMING OOOOHHHH BOY WE GOT BAD THINGS COMING FURTHER DOWN THE LINE. I am a ball of anxiety over what's going to happen we get deeper into the events of the movie.
That last, though. OUCH. It's Kylo talking, but it's definitely fueled by Ben's own horror, too, I think. Hell of thing to say, still, and I'm more than a gleefully delighted that Kylo got the last word in on that particular subject.
As always, an awesome update, and I look forward to the next one!
Re: FILL - Ben/Poe, Hux/Kylo - Kylo Ren is a double agent for the Resistance - (3d/?)
Anyway.
So admittedly my first thoughts during the first part of the chapter were, "this is going to end so badly, Ben my darling, oh God." I am just soooooo apprehensive about how Ben/Kylo's relationship to Hux is going to throw a spanner in Ben's double agent activities. (If it hasn't already somehow.)
And then I started giggling over Ben's inner six-year old being petty and easily delighted with the terror of the officers.
AND THEN YOU WROTE THIS:
(Anakin raises his arms like a conductor.)
I legit started laughing like a hyena. That line is probably my favorite thing in the entire fill so far. Oh my God, I love it. I fucking love it.
(Also, Mitaka. I have such a huge soft-spot for him. Poor darling.)
AAAAAaaaaaaaaaand the meeting with Snoke. My sense of foreboding doom immediately lit up and started shouting, BAD THINGS COMING BAD THINGS COMING OOOOHHHH BOY WE GOT BAD THINGS COMING FURTHER DOWN THE LINE. I am a ball of anxiety over what's going to happen we get deeper into the events of the movie.
That last, though. OUCH. It's Kylo talking, but it's definitely fueled by Ben's own horror, too, I think. Hell of thing to say, still, and I'm more than a gleefully delighted that Kylo got the last word in on that particular subject.
As always, an awesome update, and I look forward to the next one!